Give me the open road...
and a weighty car, strongly tied to the asphalt,
taking the turns on a racetrack, tight and fast
weaving, deftly, through cargo trucks
and a seat-warmer, removing the damp and chill,
cruise control and room to stretch my legs,
humming, reliably, towards home
and a CD player loaded with 80's hits and country albums,
Pat Benetar, Air Supply, Sugarland, Keith Urban
drowning, fortunately, my harmony
and a pale gray sky over milky fog rolling off the mountains,
the stark contrast of the bare trees and the snow-covered slopes
revealing, delicately, winter's naked beauty
Wonderland
12 hours ago
I could reel myself on your open road. My favorite part is the seat warmers...love them!
ReplyDeleteThat would be feel!
ReplyDeleteI love this slice...and the open road! Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteOpen total open! Great details and like other the other commenter, I too love seat warmers!
ReplyDeleteI really like how your poem goes from solid imagery in the first stanza to ethereal in the last!
ReplyDeleteHmmm...maybe you've got your own country song here!
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